| = oana46 | Luminita Suse [06.Nov.04 18:28] |
| This poem is charming in its simplicity. And this repeating thought of yours is more of a senses desire nature than a mind product. The title is well chosen in this respect. | |
| = Quite simple | Diana Pacuraru [08.Nov.04 21:01] |
| I sense this poem is quite simple. It's not bad, but it's simple. It doesn't have something so "out of order". But everybody writes what they feel like. The idea is not so bad though. You could try to make it a little more "out of order", to have a trace of originality, of your "fingerprint". | |