| = A little attention | Diana Pacuraru [21.Jan.05 12:59] |
| This poem is nice, but you have some mistakes. "childrens" is spelled "children" and "were borned" is correctly "were born". The idea is good. Thank u for your comment. I'm glad you enjoy my poetry. Take care with your writing and be careful. | |
| = Diana | Cristea Loredana [21.Jan.05 17:05] |
| Thank you Diana for your comment and advices . I hope i`ll hear from you soon . Peace | |
| = Welcome | Diana Pacuraru [24.Jan.05 00:37] |
| You're welcome. I'm glad I could help. | |
| = Authentic emotions | Edilberto González Trejos [21.May.05 20:54] |
| Lory, You have a natural talent for writing. When we don´t write in our mother tongue, practice is what gives us mastery. I speak Spanish myself, but I´ve been writing in English since I was 12. Your poem did touch me from the start, and this is why I say you succeed as poetess, because you arise emotions on us readers, bravo!!! With te practice you will polish a little roughness here and there... F.i. "sadest" is "saddest", no big deal Lory... The core of your poem is appealing and I liked this poem a lot, Truly SONGO | |