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Diana Pacuraru
[30.Jan.05 00:47]
Interesting poem. It resembles something I've read. By the way, do you have any idea why my poem "Eye Of Youth" which was on the recommended reading, ain't there anymore? I guess you must do, since I asked you. I think I should left it like that, not corrected, it was a small mistake after all. I like the ending of your poem, indeed. It expresses SOMETHING to me. And maybe the entire poem expresses something, but to me, only the last two verses ring a bell. That doesn't mean your entire poem is rubbish. That means I understood only a part of it. That's all.

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Interesting poem. It resembles something I've read. By the way, do you have any idea why my poem "Eye Of Youth" which was on the recommended reading, ain't there anymore? I guess you must do, since I asked you. I think I should left it like that, not corrected, it was a small mistake after all. I like the ending of your poem, indeed. It expresses SOMETHING to me. And maybe the entire poem expresses something, but to me, only the last two verses ring a bell. That doesn't mean your entire poem is rubbish. That means I understood only a part of it. That's all.