+ time to fall | Michel Martin [28.Sep.04 15:55] |
This poem is nearly shakespearean. A certain sadness surrounding a feeling which almost touches craziness. The fullfilled space of an empty, deserted soul. The last stanza is just beautiful. I can't even read it again, it's like a spell made by bewitched sounds, not words. The most emotional poem I red this autumn. Or shall we call it fall? I love "fall". And you used it there perfectly. Completly British, no doubt. | |
= odd | Motoc Lavinia [29.Sep.04 10:38] |
Quelle surprise! Indeed surprise, I wouldn't expect you to have the same perception of the English falls as mine, isn't that amazingly odd? I could say that I am honoured but that'd be man'ish, I am actually pleased. Too nice words for such a Cinderella of all falls. | |
= Nice | Anca Maria Morcovescu [05.Nov.04 22:21] |
I like the musicality and the imagery in your poem. Nice! | |
= Anca | Motoc Lavinia [06.Nov.04 15:36] |
Thanks, Anca, I think musicality is important when it comes to poems. | |