In primul rand, bun venit!
Poezia mai trebuie lucrata, dupa parerea mea. Ai putea concentra putin ideea.
Versuri ce mi-au placut:
"răsuflarea
Se pierde-n îndărăt" si "oameni ce vorbesc"
Mai trec.
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