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 =  suava
lucia sotirova
[11.Sep.04 10:32]
frumos, romantic, nostalgic, un picut naiv
poate schimbi "invartejind" - zgarie urechea si poezia
as elimina "castane" din ultima strofa - le-ai pomenit deja in prima
iti place Ana Blandiana ?

 =  multumesc
Petrescu Elsa Liliana
[11.Sep.04 16:15]
Ai dreptate, Lucia...am revenit asupra textului si am tinut cont de sugestiile tale...




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