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 =  Solemn and Obscure
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[15.May.05 13:19]
A very interesting Rhymes about death.


And nobody should waste
No teardrop for my lost,
Just the autumn should speak
From the withered dust.



These lines Are good, A very Dark perception, but then a bit Inspiring!

Nice work Tatu :)




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