= The archaic English here... | John Willy Kopperud [07.Jan.09 20:36] |
...is a bit confusing and "off" sometimes, since it doesn't make sense all the time. Check your spelling, please! Cheers from Willy | |
= . | Marius Surleac [08.Jan.09 21:39] |
I think there should be "too vile" instead of "to vile" | |
= Please revise these errors: | John Willy Kopperud [09.Jan.09 13:02] |
First: wiser THAN time Second: not all LIVE Provided revision of these two faults, I'm sure the poem will be approved! Cheers from Willy | |
= Thanks | Chelaru Dorin Alexandru [10.Jan.09 14:38] |
Thanks for the help:) Cheers! | |