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Paul Gabriel Sandu
[10.Dec.11 11:53]
Foarte jucausa incercarea ta, poemul tau experiment. Si cred ca ti-a reusit destul de bine, adica "simplele" nu suna fals. Cred ca ultimele trei versuri sint cele mai bune, cele mai expresive in conditie de brevitate deplina. "Ma uitai si ma luminai".

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Ottilia Ardeleanu
[10.Dec.11 15:05]
perfecte, dar simple :).
bref: mulțumesc este puțin spus.




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