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= Nice 4-44!
Marius Surleac
[13.Feb.08 16:00]
During the reading of this poem I observed that all the action looks like a dream, it is a talking-in-sleep poem, with a strong movement about unclear things that mix one with each other in the painting you thought about. Actually you can see what happens, and action is meaningful by the repetition of first 4 verses.

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= Nice 4-44!	Marius Surleac [13.Feb.08 16:00]
During the reading of this poem I observed that all the action looks like a dream, it is a talking-in-sleep poem, with a strong movement about unclear things that mix one with each other in the painting you thought about. Actually you can see what happens, and action is meaningful by the repetition of first 4 verses.