| = I`m not impressed...But i enjoyed it never the less... | Nemes Razvan [19.Apr.05 04:37] |
| Indeed...I understand perfectly what you mean..But another question is my priority..After you meet true happiness, after you get to the peek of your life, and fall down , can you find the power and courage to climb up again with your wounds? What you wrote is what i have been told so many times.. | |
| = it catched my feelings ( Thanks ) | Mike Tan [22.Apr.05 11:48] |
| Your poem seems to have it's subjects like my feeling today. Maybe I should not give up nor lose hope, coz maybe someday my dreams will come true! | |
| = =razvan nemes | Anca Mihai [23.Apr.05 14:04] |
| yes razvan, it is true, the poem can be very well a cliche but it's not my fault! what I tried to do writing this was not just uttering words, useless words, but putting down a feeling that gives one the power to hold on and, yes, to climb up everytime he falls down!and I myself have been told that so many times! you know what's the difference? That I felt on my own skin what those words mean! And yes, you can find the courage to clim up EVERYTIME you fall down!the question is...do you want to? | |