| = loneliness with sea flavour | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [11.May.05 14:43] |
| Sadness, loneliness... with sea flavour... I feel a light shade of despair here too, especially in 'We are one and the same And I feel nothing...' But I believe you have a spelling mistake : I think you probably wante to say 'masks' instead of 'masts'... Right? Anyway...it's a good poem. Keep it on! | |
| = mistakes of my own | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [11.May.05 14:45] |
| Sorry! 'wanted' not 'wante'. Those mistakes!... Good luck! | |
| = Thanks | Sorana Lucia Salomeia [13.May.05 11:25] |
| No, the word was really meant to be "masts"! Thank you so much for reading my works and for the comments! That was so kind of you! Take care! | |