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= Respectfully yours
Alisdaire O\'Caoimph
[21.Jun.05 18:24]
Cooking and cleaning and washing for their families,

Would flow better with not so many --Ands---- Cooking,cleaning and washing for their families....

Sorry it has taken me so very long to get back to you lassie...This poem is wonderful, rich, deep, holds the readers mind and attention.. Your english is very good, I will come back soon and go over your other writes, But in all honesty lassie, this is exceptionial..I really enjoyed reading this, You have great flow , clarity of thought, you express the imagery well....Thanks for asking me to go over your poetry..Its truly an honour...Respectfully yours Alisdaire

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= Respectfully yours	Alisdaire O\'Caoimph [21.Jun.05 18:24]
Cooking and cleaning and washing for their families, Would flow better with not so many --Ands---- Cooking,cleaning and washing for their families.... Sorry it has taken me so very long to get back to you lassie...This poem is wonderful, rich, deep, holds the readers mind and attention.. Your english is very good, I will come back soon and go over your other writes, But in all honesty lassie, this is exceptionial..I really enjoyed reading this, You have great flow , clarity of thought, you express the imagery well....Thanks for asking me to go over your poetry..Its truly an honour...Respectfully yours Alisdaire