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 =  'return to innocence'
Vasilescu Alvin Bastian
[22.Jun.05 19:30]
The 'Return to innocence'... So sweet. You reminded me of some forgotten memories from childhood...Thanks! Never thought I could bring those back and still... Very good exercise. But shall we try an exercise of amnesia next time, to see if that works too? (I can really use that sort of exercise)
All the best 2U! ...Bastian...

 =  back to the soil
Maria Schuler
[27.Jun.05 16:39]
thanks! it came quick and spontaneous while writing a description to a photo i took a few weeks ago... the model had a very strong hold on me with her unique way of emanating innocence in that moment. although i was already so familliar with her voluptous way of showing her self awareness, that moment made me forget her ...look pass her...see the soil from which we all came...i'm not sure how much of that this poem captured, though. thanks again. always apreciate an external eye bent upon my words, and most of all when that eye is somehow pleased with what it sees.

 =  "Rerborn individual"
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[10.Sep.05 05:26]
Your text makes me feel just fine, I always came up with a new idea when i'm reading anyones text, especially those with impacts, as this one, i feel like i wanna return to my childhood and change everything, even those things that put me down, i wanna return coz i want to be a better person, and perhaps there are alot of things i wanna do! inspite of I didn't have guts to do it since from my past, During my past I know to my self that I'm not that brave to face everything, always think that i will fail, it will be awful, and first of all it is uninteresting, i lose my confidence, but now as from the present I am a new person with alot of power and opportunities to show, so I wanna return to my past and change everything as well so that Everyone and so as me, will forgoten the omens of my past, just because i didn't have guts to do it!

Thanks to your text( I remeber my past ) even if it's not that interesting/nice.




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