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 =  ...indeed a revery...
Vasilescu Alvin Bastian
[08.Jul.05 15:56]
Intense feelings. 'A dream within a dream…'... You know? Reality can sometimes be that dream within a dream, but that depends of course, on what you meant... Liked the sensation of 'incapability' given by the first verses, the incapability of leaving, of rising above destiny...and the image of the pale and serene moonlight you created... The final part inserts the reader a state of calm, tasting, somehow, that 'sound of silence' you promoted there... Deep indeed! All the best to you!




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