| + to the unwanted | Corina Gina Papouis [10.Jul.09 13:16] |
| A beautiful sensitive poem with a peculiar yet natural approach (I like peculiar!)..this alien stork..rather a cuckoo in disguise.:) The sense of isolation and inadequacy prevails and nests inside reader’s soul. Very touching... Romulus, to many more like this! Cheers, Corina | |
| = Corina, Laurentiu... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [10.Jul.09 17:16] |
| Thank you Corina, Laurentiu... Good to be back, on and off track... Stork because on high and alone, yet faithful... rcm | |
| = You leave this imprint on my mind here, Romulus: | John Willy Kopperud [11.Jul.09 22:02] |
"I feel a morning on my cheek." That touched me! Cheers from Willy | |
| = the stork effect | Simona Sumanaru [16.Jul.09 17:34] |
| I guess that if the "alien stork" had encountered welcoming chimneys in his path, the story would have been different, deprived of the morning on your cheek... what a sad eternity that would have been! Wonderful poem, thank you for it. | |
| = to Simona, with thanks... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [03.Aug.09 17:20] |
| Thank you Simona, for your gentle heart's reading of my written tears... rcm | |