| = Welcome new member! | Laurentiu Ion [28.Jul.09 11:38] |
| here's a dazzling impressive poem -- i liked especially the penultimate stanza, with those images beautifully shaped. a superbly well written piece! ... | |
| = sunny feeling | Diana Todea [02.Aug.09 11:26] |
| I get the feeling you like sunny days. Nice imagery and transparency of emotions. Still too much text, you have a tendency of useless repetition (at long nouns). Good luck from now on. Cheers! | |
| = Cheers | Anil Kumar Bhola [03.Aug.09 11:52] |
| Thanks for the nice and constructive comment. I shall be careful in my second experiment :) | |