| = Veronica | Luminita Suse [22.Jan.10 15:33] |
| Nice play of words conversEve, perforatEvily What should I make of virgene? | |
| = LS | Veronica Valeanu [22.Jan.10 19:47] |
| here, apart from the coinage (which i always take seriously) there really is a play of words: Eve/Evil (noun, independent vs adv., subsidiary) about the origins of the world and their unused/unrecognized forces -interface between the creature and gene. thank you for your interest on this text. V.V. | |
| = Yet, again | Luminita Suse [23.Jan.10 05:04] |
| Thank you kindly for your answer but I still am puzzled by the word "virgine". Please revise your text | |
| = no | Veronica Valeanu [23.Jan.10 09:53] |
| well you'd better not. actually, there was no real feedback from you. or arguments of any kind. the text will stay as it is. | |
| + appeal of words | Edilberto González Trejos [03.Apr.10 22:38] |
| Absolutely great use of imagery and philology! Great poem. Cheers | |
| = . | Veronica Valeanu [04.Apr.10 19:19] |
| thank you for your appreciation, Edilberto :)! VV | |
| = impressive | Lelia Vatasescu [05.Jun.10 13:59] |
| very sharp and subtle lines and imagery and smart word games. by the way, i was notified i received a comment from you, but it seems my text was blocked, i'm pretty curious about it though. | |
| = . | Veronica Valeanu [05.Jun.10 14:11] |
| it was blocked because it was in Romanian. on this version of the site we can't post in other languages than English. you can resubmit it on the Romanian version (click on the Romanian flag on top of the page) i hope this won't be much trouble to you. if you have any other questions, on my page you'll find my email address. thank you for your kind words. concepts can undergo play-upon-words. VV | |