| + fate | Corina Gina Papouis [15.Dec.09 19:07] |
| I loved the intensity and the power this text carries, like a spell...beautiful rhymes and rhythm, too. i know is a quatrain, part of me wishes this was a long poem...:) well done Marius! | |
| = thank you Corina! | Marius Surleac [16.Dec.09 19:41] |
| Thank you very much Corina for the yellow sign and I'm happy that you enjoyed reading my poem. I'm sorry I couldn't make this poem longer, but this is how a quatrain should be - short with ramifications and expressive as well. Regards, Marius | |
| = Expressive indeed, Marius- | John Willy Kopperud [16.Dec.09 20:32] |
| -and I like it. Nevertheless I don't think Corina is off the mark. If you made an attempt at putting a succession of verses together with the same rhythm and meter, who knows, maybe the result would be intriguing...Not necessarily in this piece, though. Cheers from Willy | |
| = hi Willy | Marius Surleac [17.Dec.09 08:01] |
| Indeed, a succession would fit well but then won't be just a quatrain. As soon as I'll write one I'll post it here. I do like rhymed poetry. :) I'm stuck with quatrains right now because they have a future purpose. ;) Cheers Willy and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem Marius | |
| = Just a little thought | Cãtãrãu Alina - Andreea [21.Dec.09 13:41] |
| It's short and beautiful. I think that sometimes the essence can be drew with the help of a few words, not with elaborated ideas. Cheers! | |
| = thanks | Marius Surleac [02.Jan.10 13:00] |
| Thank you Alina. I'm glad you liked it. Best wishes, Marius | |
| = congrats. | Vicleanu Mihaita [08.Jan.10 14:47] |
| such depth...so simple, yet so complexe...great quatrain ...hmm...have u heard of Amalia Rodriguez, the portuguese fado singer?....:P | |
| = thank you Mihai | Marius Surleac [08.Jan.10 21:03] |
| Hi Mihai. Thank you very much for your kind comment. I'm glad you liked it. Of course I listened Amalia Rodrigues. Cheers, Marius | |