| = trapped... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [23.Dec.09 12:50] |
| Mircea, Interesting thoughts, Gothic fantasies, trapped nevertheless in the self-imposed metre, lacking all through, those elements which must be present if such a classic construction is chosen. I would suggest shorter poems, for a better apprehension of style, and maybe the use of unbound styles, for "training". When one chooses a world created by literature's giants, a need to grow into that world arises, especially if classical poetry style is brought in... rcm | |