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= welcome new member
Veronica Valeanu
[09.May.10 09:35]
you wanted the text to be minimal, but this diminishes its power to convince or convey thrills.
it would be a good exercise to try rendering clusters of ideas into more subtle ways.or focus on the effects, rather than the hypostases.
it resembles a riddle, perhaps too much.
take more courage!

don't forget to follow the rules of the site.
cheers,
VV

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= welcome new member	Veronica Valeanu [09.May.10 09:35]
you wanted the text to be minimal, but this diminishes its power to convince or convey thrills. it would be a good exercise to try rendering clusters of ideas into more subtle ways.or focus on the effects, rather than the hypostases. it resembles a riddle, perhaps too much. take more courage! don't forget to follow the rules of the site. cheers, VV