| = LL | Veronica Valeanu [13.Jun.10 18:29] |
| you have that sense of musicality which is rare, combined with the sharp detail of the word impact. i fell your aim is to acquire a larger, eclectic perspective where it's the detail that gives movement to the ensemble. effects of gliding and roughness the last 2 lines are marvellous- the contrast with the 1st line is so well-built cheers, VV | |
| = err | Veronica Valeanu [13.Jun.10 19:16] |
| feel* | |
| = makin' simple things sound catchin'... | Lestat de Llamorte [14.Jun.10 11:36] |
| Merci, I'm doing my best, always heading for the better. Love English deeply, love to play words and create different simultaneous meanings in lines, to think and find out more, that can be revealed at first sight. And the musical sound comes from being a musician. My good teachers: Keats, Shelley, Blake and Machen (in prose) gave me the feeling. 'twas strong foundation to start with and develop... | |