Los comentarios de los miembros:

= so
Veronica Valeanu
[22.Jul.10 09:58]
what seems artificial here is the ready-served cronology/enumeration of moments. perhaps hasty and superficial. we cannot deepen the sensations or understand the purpose.
= Thanks for your objections
Andreea Maresi
[22.Jul.10 18:12]
I know that it might be an agitated and maybe incomprehensible poetry, but this is what I wanted to express. I thought of humans' hopes that are crumbled by unreal ways... When we think that are safe, then it is the real finish.
But you've right... I think it is superficial. Anyway, I hope that I will be able to be more accurate.

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= so	Veronica Valeanu [22.Jul.10 09:58]
what seems artificial here is the ready-served cronology/enumeration of moments. perhaps hasty and superficial. we cannot deepen the sensations or understand the purpose.

= Thanks for your objections	Andreea Maresi [22.Jul.10 18:12]
I know that it might be an agitated and maybe incomprehensible poetry, but this is what I wanted to express. I thought of humans' hopes that are crumbled by unreal ways... When we think that are safe, then it is the real finish. But you've right... I think it is superficial. Anyway, I hope that I will be able to be more accurate.