| = interesting | Marius Surleac [01.Aug.10 21:14] |
| Johanne, your poem has a serious look but as serious as it looks the closer the idea of experimental acting. I noticed a strange rhythm given probably because of the two-line stanzas and also of the wiped rhyme that is to be found within the poem. Nice! | |
| = Strange rythm ...makes interesting | Johanne Farmer [03.Aug.10 03:37] |
| I fancy mixing serious subjects with ludic images ... and the rhymes, well they flow naturally even when I don't want them. Thanks for your comment. | |
| + cheering up | Diana Todea [05.Aug.10 15:11] |
| I have to give you a shiny star for the cheering up you caused with your poem. It's really nice and I hope to see more of your work. Cheers, Diana. | |