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Veronica Valeanu
[31.Aug.10 12:32]
i would suggest:
[time is dragging/pulling me along] - crawl is intransitive
like a mother who tries to take her child out of
was just a hide-and-seek
counting loud
searching but finding no one
morning
a responsibility a way to
i wonder if the
are looking like
i'm a man
it will seem
i dream about
woman inside whom i could live like a poised office worker
who always comes home... pays...falls
or i could turn her into...tunnel
all over
about the evolution
divides...divide
the way street lamps burn down

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Veronica Valeanu
[31.Aug.10 12:33]

searching for b.

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emilian valeriu pal
[31.Aug.10 12:58]
Someone said that you konw a language when you think in that language. It seems like i'm not. Not yet.
Thank you for help.

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Veronica Valeanu
[31.Aug.10 15:14]
well sometimes there are inherent mistakes
but you know practice hones skills
why don't you try translating some of your older texts, those in Romanian? apart from gaining more ground on the English {language/ readers] territory, it wouldn't be a bad idea to get closer to "internationalising" your work.

looking forward to new texts,
V.V.

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laurentiu ion
[31.Aug.10 17:48]
business instead of bussiness

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Veronica Valeanu
[30.Aug.11 12:19]
basta= [no more] or [enough]




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