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Veronica Valeanu
[21.Nov.10 12:20]
quite a courageous poem. it denotes an analytic thinking, mingled with doses of affection and self-renouncement.

I would like to encourage you to try envisaging in every line a bigger amount of clusters of words related to the message you want to convey, not only sequences of words that belong to a single image or idea. - (But not here.)

I think that the end is not so necessary.

keep writing.
regards,
V.




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