| = . | Veronica Vãleanu [17.Sep.11 10:32] |
| [there is...] instead of [Exists just one form of] [profesionally determined] [oneness of the] dynasties [the populations they ruled] [socio-politically] [are used to applying] [making the task of ruling...easier] intensive equilibrium [endowed with...mental abilities] categorically [for long] instead of [on long time periods] deprive of [a brand new state] instead of [a bright..] royalty] instead of [regality] a possible comparison... is undisputable | |
| = good summary | James A Williams [22.Jan.12 03:35] |
| A good summary, though I confess that it was years ago I read it. A few observations and corrections if I may. Briliant is spelled 'brilliant,' (first and second sentences.) Sand warms should be 'sand worms.' Dinasty would be 'dynasty.' "…it is one which it was thought on long time," Try: it is one which it was thought on 'for a' long time," apllied should be spelled 'applied.' thanks for this piece, jaw | |