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Rodica Vasilescu
[09.Oct.12 17:25]
don’t smile, don’t sit comfortably,
don’t ask for champagne,
the plane will fall.
got another opinion?

sounds much better.

this might actually be the only good thing in your poem.

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= ...	Rodica Vasilescu [09.Oct.12 17:25]
don’t smile, don’t sit comfortably, don’t ask for champagne, the plane will fall. got another opinion? sounds much better. this might actually be the only good thing in your poem.