+ Perfectly | John Willy Kopperud [17.Jun.12 13:52] |
-ominous bliss, at first in a casual mood, till it really hits me in the last lines. Congratulations, Dan! Cheers from Willy | |
= thanks a lot | dan marius [18.Jun.12 16:09] |
yellow stars, red stars and everything :) thanks. I'm certainly not wasting time here :D | |
= blissful gravitas | Ronald E Shields [08.Jul.12 18:45] |
you had me feeling blissfully numb until the last 5 lines when bliss becomes a word with real gravity. excellent shift of tone in my opinion. | |
= . | dan marius [17.Jul.12 11:38] |
thanks. glad you liked it | |