| = * | Bodea Diana Mihaela [29.Mar.13 15:08] |
| I do not appreciate the urban style of medieval times - cage, slaves and so on - but what made me comment was the feeling that you are beyond those limitations through the that ”dance”, ”happy” and ”always been”. | |
| = ** | dan marius [29.Mar.13 15:32] |
| Unfortunately you can find cages full of slaves in the present too. As for "my limitations"... you never know.. I might just be a happy slave dancing in a cage. "Always have been". | |
| = daggering on... | Motoc Lavinia [29.Mar.13 20:33] |
| Good to see you are on the wave! It is that the receptor is not necessarily the addressee ,one's intentions might start off as pointy , yet end up soft and curvy, but ok, that is far from being the point. There is a lot of musicality in the last two poems( well, I hear it even amongst all these sharp objects), a gothic streak( as usual). keep writing! | |
| = . | dan marius [30.Mar.13 21:12] |
| Thank you. That's very kind of you. | |
| = I liked especially | Anca Gud [07.Apr.13 23:26] |
| the beginning with "the blood from the fresh wound called love". I think you are right, we are all slaves, in some ways... good poem, strong message. glad to read it. and your 'truth', dan, spokes to me, also... | |