= . | dan [21.Sep.05 09:46] |
off you go | |
= when all you had once in the past was me | Dana MuÂșat [30.Nov.05 16:14] |
Roght now i'm listening to "Streets of Filadelphia", by Bruce Springsteen and it is a perfect match with your poem. Don't stop, you are on your good way. "my prince"-try to avoid this type of words. Thank you! | |
= A kind of keep walking | Cristina Muntean [01.Dec.05 03:48] |
Dear Dana, Thank you for the commentary. I was kind of taken away when I wrote this poem, as I imagined it a text for a song. So, I am happy to find out that it reached its purpose :-) Noticed your remark about "price", too. I have a long way to go, as for writing in English. But good thoughts like yours help me "keep walking" :-) All the best! | |