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dan
[21.Sep.05 09:46]
off you go
= when all you had once in the past was me
Dana Muºat
[30.Nov.05 16:14]
Roght now i'm listening to "Streets of Filadelphia", by Bruce Springsteen and it is a perfect match with your poem.

Don't stop, you are on your good way.

"my prince"-try to avoid this type of words.

Thank you!
= A kind of keep walking
Cristina Muntean
[01.Dec.05 03:48]
Dear Dana,
Thank you for the commentary. I was kind of taken away when I wrote this poem, as I imagined it a text for a song. So, I am happy to find out that it reached its purpose :-)
Noticed your remark about "price", too.
I have a long way to go, as for writing in English. But good thoughts like yours help me "keep walking" :-)
All the best!

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= .	dan [21.Sep.05 09:46]
off you go

= when all you had once in the past was me	Dana Muºat [30.Nov.05 16:14]
Roght now i'm listening to "Streets of Filadelphia", by Bruce Springsteen and it is a perfect match with your poem. Don't stop, you are on your good way. "my prince"-try to avoid this type of words. Thank you!

= A kind of keep walking	Cristina Muntean [01.Dec.05 03:48]
Dear Dana, Thank you for the commentary. I was kind of taken away when I wrote this poem, as I imagined it a text for a song. So, I am happy to find out that it reached its purpose :-) Noticed your remark about "price", too. I have a long way to go, as for writing in English. But good thoughts like yours help me "keep walking" :-) All the best!