| = Welcome Back Raj | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [27.Dec.05 04:20] |
| the deepest intimacy, an intense feeling. a fine text for expression! | |
| = Thank you joshua | raj thampi [27.Dec.05 07:11] |
| Thank you so much Joshua. I am so glad to read "welcome back" part. Yes it was a long break, more than 8 months. I was going through a winter :) & when I wrote the text, all I wanted to gather was the emotions I had gone through during the first love, and making it. | |
| = amazing. | Jan Pengelly [30.Dec.05 03:15] |
| this is so beautiful, raj! you've managed to convey such beauty and tenderness in this without falling into that trap of the cliché or the downright nauseous. This is a fine, fine work. SO glad to have read it. The images that stay with me most are the moment of surprise, the rhythmic movement, the storm, the rain but - most of all - the rain making a stream "And Your face holding A spring and blossoms And I close I close my eyes Feeling the peace" | |
| = Jan Pengelly | raj thampi [01.Jan.06 07:24] |
| Hello there Jan. I am really flattered by your comment. If you already noticed, I use (due to my poor english) the simplest words, simplest methods to nibble down few of my moments which mate with my past. Going back to past is not always that enjoyable, still. Let me thank you once again for your encouraging comment. raj | |
| = feeling complete... | Luminita Baboianu [01.Jan.06 15:05] |
| Happy - still - blameless new year, Raj! So glad to hear from you again, and it is such a great poem... Simple it's always better! lol :) | |