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Marius Surleac
[29.Feb.08 10:24]
Ok!
You have some expressions that don’t look too good. For example: you can not say "I need a space" but you can say "I need space/I need some space" because space can not be "a"; "don't loose" you can change it with "don't loose yourself". Try to fix it and maybe you will get out your text from workshop!

= Thank you.
Balc Oana Nicoleta
[03.Mar.08 21:06]
tx for ur oppinion and that u read me:) means a lot for me.

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= !?	Marius Surleac [29.Feb.08 10:24]
Ok! You have some expressions that don’t look too good. For example: you can not say "I need a space" but you can say "I need space/I need some space" because space can not be "a"; "don't loose" you can change it with "don't loose yourself". Try to fix it and maybe you will get out your text from workshop!

= Thank you.	Balc Oana Nicoleta [03.Mar.08 21:06]
tx for ur oppinion and that u read me:) means a lot for me.