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Marius Surleac
[09.Jun.08 08:27]
I like how you pointed the celebration of New Year and joining together (both family and friends), but I think that in the one of the last stanzas would be more suitable to use "this year, every year". Cheers from Marius!
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mazHur
[09.Jun.08 16:06]
Yes, I agree with your worthy suggestion and have corrected the line accordingly.
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting
best wishes

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= !!!	Marius Surleac [09.Jun.08 08:27]
I like how you pointed the celebration of New Year and joining together (both family and friends), but I think that in the one of the last stanzas would be more suitable to use "this year, every year". Cheers from Marius!

= worthy suggestion	mazHur [09.Jun.08 16:06]
Yes, I agree with your worthy suggestion and have corrected the line accordingly. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting best wishes