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= wrote from your heart ...
Christopher Thripp
[22.Feb.08 11:44]
great job andy...my "ol" freind.
= good
Daniela Voicu
[01.Mar.08 17:22]
good job!
= my opinion about...
Marius Surleac
[07.Apr.08 10:53]
Again the same problem: the repeating is pointless here. More than 70% from the text is repeated with no specification, you've modified only some stanzas but the skeleton of the text is the same. Try to fix the problem and I think that you'll pass out the text from the Workshop.
The idea is ok but needs to be improved. As I said before, the repetition is good, but too much repetition is annoying.
Cheers!

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= wrote from your heart ...	Christopher Thripp [22.Feb.08 11:44]
great job andy...my "ol" freind.

= good	Daniela Voicu [01.Mar.08 17:22]
good job!

= my opinion about...	Marius Surleac [07.Apr.08 10:53]
Again the same problem: the repeating is pointless here. More than 70% from the text is repeated with no specification, you've modified only some stanzas but the skeleton of the text is the same. Try to fix the problem and I think that you'll pass out the text from the Workshop. The idea is ok but needs to be improved. As I said before, the repetition is good, but too much repetition is annoying. Cheers!