| = Mihai, a very good job!!! | Marius Surleac [13.Mar.08 09:47] |
| Nice manipulating snapshots. I have three ideas about your poem: first one makes me think to "The Wall" album and movie from Pink Floyd (is a sort of similar idea); the second leads me to "The Cube" trilogy when you mentioned the two meters above door; third has in the middle plan the same door, but I would changed "two meters above" with "six feet under" - giving me the idea that you're inside the coffin. Anyway, I like very much this poem and I would give you a star if I would be able. What I didn't like to this poem was the FINAL - you ruined all the mysticism; my opinion is that you have to let the readers two make their own ideas about the text, not to give you the answers. Congratulations Mihai! | |
| = Thank you Marius | Vicleanu Mihaita [13.Mar.08 14:46] |
| I just now see the resemblance with the Cube..you're right..i'm glad you like it...about the final..what you said might be a good good...thanks for reading | |