| = ??? | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [17.Mar.08 18:48] |
| which the artist’s spirit was wrote onto | |
| = ??? | Marius Surleac [19.Mar.08 13:35] |
| I don't want to be rude but I don't think that there's a self-restraint but actually is a restraint from the recommended reading first page titles. Also there are some mistakes and I simply can not understand what you wanted to say - I understand that inspiration is in everything but... Which is the idea? I think that any author of the texts presented in you inspiration should make a short comment about the content of the text. Maybe I am wrong but, we need more opinions!!! | |
| = to be revised... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [19.Apr.08 10:58] |
| which the artist’s isnpiration was wrote onto??? | |
| = to be revised... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [19.Apr.08 14:21] |
| has written onto!!! | |
| = Cu deosebit respect , Oana | oana blandiana betlevy [19.Apr.08 17:59] |
| Mr Maramuresanu , I wanted to express the past of “to exist” in perception of Shakespeare's ... but I do count on your profesionalism ; if your advice still remains as to be "has written" then I shall follow it. Many thanks for time taking on my thoughts . | |
| = just a thought... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [19.Apr.08 18:08] |
| OK, in my humble oppinion you should chose "As the Paper Heart on which the artist’s inspiration has been written onto" otherwise the intended sense itself gets lost... I hope I am making sense. | |
| = Cu deosebit respect , | oana blandiana betlevy [20.Apr.08 15:43] |
| Mr Maramuresanu , I am considering myself very lucky being read and so kindly & professionally adviced by You. I am loved & equally challenged by the wisest God as You said You also are; is the reason I keep saying I am blessed to be alive no matter either good or bad is over. Oana | |