| = Please... | John Willy Kopperud [05.Apr.08 16:18] |
| ...correct the misspelling of "rhytm." Otherwise interesting. Cheers from Willy | |
| = true andy. | Christopher Thripp [08.Apr.08 04:21] |
| great job my friend...you would be correct it is for both of us. | |
| = true story. | Christopher Thripp [08.Apr.08 04:25] |
| If anyone is wondering why i refer to paul as andy ...............short story... we have been friends for many years...I had always called him andy it was 3-4 years ...before i found out his real name is paul. "true story" | |
| = should be a little bit revised... | Marius Surleac [08.Apr.08 10:43] |
| First I think that should be corrected "rhythm" and second the number of syllables exceeds the number of a haiku. See what you can do to fix the problem. Interesting indeed but I think that the final should be replaced to remain only first three stanzas ... it will look like a haiku and will sound better. Cheers! | |
| = .... | Daniela Voicu [08.Apr.08 23:22] |
| great job my friend.... | |