| = my opinion... | Marius Surleac [07.Apr.08 10:47] |
| I think that the repetition is too obvious here. Maybe if you'll try to change the text a little bit, to make from two ideas more I think that you'll pass out the text from the workshop. There is too much "thinking to men". | |
| = maybe ? | Christopher Thripp [08.Apr.08 03:55] |
| marius the needle got stuck ...that's the point...who stole the needle? | |
| = !!! | Marius Surleac [08.Apr.08 10:52] |
| Yes I understand you Chris! But it can be expressed different. | |
| = yes. | Christopher Thripp [12.Apr.08 04:44] |
| yes you are correct marius.. | |
| = Brush up your grammar | Lisnic Anna [08.Aug.08 23:32] |
| I agree with all the rest, and just a question; What on Earth is 'stolled'? Are you sure this is the correct form? | |