| = I suggest, Daniel... | John Willy Kopperud [07.Apr.08 18:37] |
| ...that "Lake frozen over" might be a preferable succession of words in the first line. Given that small change the poem does, in fact, get interesting. Cheers from Willy | |
| = ............... | Daniel Lacatus [08.Apr.08 20:00] |
| Thank you very much for comment. You dye truth. | |
| = wonderful one... | Marius Surleac [16.Apr.08 16:54] |
| Again ... simple, expressive, swiftly provoked. Beautiful! Cheers! | |
| = Thank you for you comment! | Daniel Lacatus [17.Apr.08 14:30] |
| You more I wait when he should want | |
| = Great job! | Bogdan G. Marin [21.Apr.08 15:50] |
| You speak the truth in a howling effusion. | |
| = to Bogdan G. Marin | Daniel Lacatus [22.Apr.08 23:28] |
| Thank you very much for comment. | |
| = ... | Daniela Voicu [09.May.08 00:58] |
| very good haiku !i love! | |