= beautiful poem... | Marius Surleac [14.Apr.08 09:12] |
Interesting indeed, good poem! Very expressive the atmosphere beyond the "painting" described like a short history, then the time that stops to express something different from the describing of the first part, changing the view from a distant point to a closer one that is the basic idea of the whole text. So, that's why this poem is looks like an "autistic" poem. Finally, the idea of the pork that saves a human person with the kidney is a real one, because pork is the most appropriate being to human when we talk about the inner vital organs. A beautiful poem! Congrats! Cheers from Marius! | |
+ Pig Power! | John Willy Kopperud [15.Apr.08 17:20] |
An intriguing point of view! Cheers from Willy | |
= Marius, Willy | ion a [15.Apr.08 18:43] |
thanks guys, i'm aware it might cause consternation, just like autism, which seems to deal much better with wide spread patterns than linear logic | |
= .............. | Daniel Lacatus [16.Apr.08 15:47] |
Rich in texture, depth of meanings. Daniel | |
= cheers | Christopher Thripp [19.Apr.08 05:50] |
brilliant work... enjoyed the thought you put into this one. | |
= thanks Daniel, Christopher | ion a [19.Apr.08 08:59] |
thanks for your kind words | |