| = nice job.... | Mike Aspros [19.Apr.08 10:47] |
| I like the lack of punctuation, and the haunting feeling you get when you read this. So true to self doubt yourself on the path you currently choose. Great line "denials gather around her Likes leaves in the fall" -Thank you for sharing! | |
| = yes. | Christopher Thripp [18.Apr.08 02:51] |
| sweet poem my friend ... | |
| = !!! | Marius Surleac [18.Apr.08 09:45] |
| You should brush up a little bit the expression you use in the poem; the text is good but try to improve the connections between words - the grammatical part! Hope will get out the workshop! | |