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= I appreciate the imperative emotion you put forth here...
John Willy Kopperud
[24.Apr.08 12:16]

...but the grammar/syntax needs a bit of revising.
It appears logical that the second line must read:
"Hurl the sun and the moon into one being."

Cheers from Willy
= interesting...
Marius Surleac
[24.Apr.08 12:18]
Interesting idea of alchemy for creating from passion a lovely being.
Cheers
= Thank you
Bogdan G. Marin
[24.Apr.08 16:56]
John Willy Kopperud, thank you for showing me that mistake, and thank you for your comment.

Marius Surleac, thank you too for reading "Alchemy", I`m glad you both liked it.

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= I appreciate the imperative emotion you put forth here...	John Willy Kopperud [24.Apr.08 12:16]
...but the grammar/syntax needs a bit of revising. It appears logical that the second line must read: "Hurl the sun and the moon into one being." Cheers from Willy

= interesting...	Marius Surleac [24.Apr.08 12:18]
Interesting idea of alchemy for creating from passion a lovely being. Cheers

= Thank you	Bogdan G. Marin [24.Apr.08 16:56]
John Willy Kopperud, thank you for showing me that mistake, and thank you for your comment. Marius Surleac, thank you too for reading "Alchemy", I`m glad you both liked it.