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= Important question, Chris.
John Willy Kopperud
[19.May.08 09:42]

How should man tackle defeat? The first stanza is good, but the second one seems less precise - maybe too many words?
I give you credit for the theme, and I think that if you don't find a way to improve this one, it might be fruitful to post another along the same line of thought.
With respect, cheers from Willy

= thanks willy .
Christopher Thripp
[19.May.08 15:57]
when somenone knows he has not given his best ...this was the theme...i understand what you are saying willy...thanks for the comment...

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= Important question, Chris.	John Willy Kopperud [19.May.08 09:42]
How should man tackle defeat? The first stanza is good, but the second one seems less precise - maybe too many words? I give you credit for the theme, and I think that if you don't find a way to improve this one, it might be fruitful to post another along the same line of thought. With respect, cheers from Willy

= thanks willy .	Christopher Thripp [19.May.08 15:57]
when somenone knows he has not given his best ...this was the theme...i understand what you are saying willy...thanks for the comment...