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Marius Surleac
[01.Jun.08 07:31]
I want to ask you if in the second stanza did you wanted to use "off" instead "of", or just "of"? Thank you!

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Christopher Thripp
[02.Jun.08 08:47]
andy this is excellent...your best yet ...i loved the thought and deep expressions that went into this if was a star giver this would one definately...




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