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+ welcome back Paul, congrats!
Marius Surleac
[26.Jun.08 09:05]
Great imagery, nice words, powerful (the first two stanzas are extraordinary), smart metaphors.
"Callous words" for callous sensations, plasticity.

Well done Paul!

Sincerely,
Marius
 =  great job andy...
Christopher Thripp
[27.Jun.08 05:09]
i agree with marius ...great work andy ...tuff thoughts and emotions to deal with ..
 =  When someone succeds in writing a poem, the finishing touch...
John Willy Kopperud
[27.Jun.08 19:40]
...is always refined. - Bear a shield of thoughts
for future defense Yeah...that rings true.
Cheers from Willy



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