| = Horror, is it... | John Willy Kopperud [28.Jul.08 11:09] |
| ...the outline of the succubus in the background that I see? Not bad, but I wonder : MY NAILS SHRIEKING YOUR EYES LIKE A BLACK CAT shouldn't that rather be; STRIKING YOUR EYES? Anyway that would make much more sense to me. Cheers from Willy | |
| = i change | Daniela Voicu [28.Jul.08 13:17] |
| thank you , yes i change | |
| = Daniela | Corina Gina Papouis [28.Jul.08 18:20] |
| Daniela, Your beast is quite scarry..lots of anger and a sense of voodoo, too:). I wouldn't like to be the one walking by your poet/ propriety. Interesting work. Regards, | |
| = property. | Christopher Thripp [29.Jul.08 02:59] |
| i think thats meant to be property.? if i know her writings well enough!! | |
| = interesting | Lynn West [29.Jul.08 08:40] |
| Very deep, Dani. Venting anger can be good as long as it doesn't become all consuming. | |
| = thank you | Daniela Voicu [31.Jul.08 22:42] |
| Thank you Lynn | |
| = A wee bit more to be done | John Willy Kopperud [30.Jul.08 21:09] |
| Necessary corrections: 12.line: ALL OF your body 13.line: a lot OF food ... Good luck! Cheers from Willy | |