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= one small...
Marius Surleac
[02.Aug.08 16:56]
I think that in the third line should be "silence with more than a scream" instead of "that a scream". Anyway, the poem is nice.

Cheers!
= Right, as always
Cleo Sandoi
[05.Aug.08 11:20]
...how come every time I try not to be careless you are there to spot the only thing I did not notice? Thanks for the feed-back. Most welcomed and appreciated.

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= one small...	Marius Surleac [02.Aug.08 16:56]
I think that in the third line should be "silence with more than a scream" instead of "that a scream". Anyway, the poem is nice. Cheers!

= Right, as always	Cleo Sandoi [05.Aug.08 11:20]
...how come every time I try not to be careless you are there to spot the only thing I did not notice? Thanks for the feed-back. Most welcomed and appreciated.