| = help me | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 03:41] |
| please if there are some more mistakes. | |
| = suggestion | Mike Aspros [07.Aug.08 06:56] |
| the last eight lines of your poem works for me, yet the top half is hard for me to get into. Maybe you might consider reducing the line lengths but in any case its just my opinion. Your idea behind the poem is good. | |
| = mike | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 09:08] |
| what line from the might do you considere are in redundance? i can delete them. but, you know, it is an translation off a romanian poetry. | |
| = needs changing now. | Christopher Thripp [07.Aug.08 08:22] |
| i think it's a good idea but really should never of been allowed to be published ..my advice delete it and start again..simplify things sometimes your message will be easier translated in a more simplified format.. | |
| = christopher | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 09:08] |
| thank's for suggestions. i dont't know, if i'll delete the text i thing he will go, when i'll start it again, to the page of autor, or my profile only, i thing here the rules are just like on anonia.ro, just in english version. is'nt it? sorry for the last of your texts, i don't thinked that somebody will do it. thank you again. | |
| = my advice! | Marius Surleac [07.Aug.08 09:14] |
| Ecaterina, do not hurry to make different conclusions without any strong basis. You can edit your text within, without deleting it and it won't go in "Workshop only" or "Portfolio only" once published. Here, the things are different. Be patient! Thank you very much! Marius | |
| = marius | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 09:20] |
| i know how to edit my text without deleting it, but i sad about that case if i'll delete it, and posted again. then it will be sill in front page? | |
| = to clear this up. | Christopher Thripp [07.Aug.08 16:28] |
| that was not my text ecaterina ..i was guesting someone elses work ..i do this from time to time i think it's important to guest shy poets...once they feel confident they will join our site ...with your poem here like i said the idea was good i think simplify and re-post...or like marius suggests just edit and re-post... thank you | |
| = cristopher | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 21:40] |
| i am ok if i don't have grammar mistakes, it's enough for me now. with time i'll know your language better and i will clear the redundance parts. ok? | |
| = thank you | Christopher Thripp [08.Aug.08 02:01] |
| i agree ...keep writing ecaterina ...it's hard enough in one language... i wish you well... | |
| + ... | Christopher Thripp [13.Aug.08 01:57] |
| star my dear | |
| - !!! | Marius Surleac [13.Aug.08 08:03] |
| Chris, please justify your star! | |