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= I like the last...
John Willy Kopperud
[13.Sep.08 18:56]
...two lines especially;
only my heart sings
on strings of pain.
That's musical! Just beware; if you want to express yourself
in past tense you should write: All birds burned out.
If it's present tense you'll have to drop the apostrophe.
Cheers from Willy
= John Willy Kopperud
Daniel Lacatus
[19.Sep.08 21:57]
you right again. Thanks

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= I like the last...	John Willy Kopperud [13.Sep.08 18:56]
...two lines especially; only my heart sings on strings of pain. That's musical! Just beware; if you want to express yourself in past tense you should write: All birds burned out. If it's present tense you'll have to drop the apostrophe. Cheers from Willy

= John Willy Kopperud	Daniel Lacatus [19.Sep.08 21:57]
you right again. Thanks